Verdict
Gold-amber: the route direction is good for first-time China, but the first two days and the Guilin or Yangshuo handoff need protection before booking.

This sample reviews a first-time China plan where the destinations are sensible, but the traveler is worried about trains, payment, language, arrival fatigue, and what to book first.

Gold-amber: the route direction is good for first-time China, but the first two days and the Guilin or Yangshuo handoff need protection before booking.
Beijing -> Xi'an -> Guilin or Yangshuo -> Shanghai is a coherent first-China route: history, food, soft scenery, and a clean international exit.
Do not lock hotels by lowest price before checking station access, arrival time, luggage flow, and whether the scenic base should stay calm.
Use the first Beijing night as recovery and setup, protect a full Xi'an day, choose one calm scenic base, and keep Shanghai as the easy exit city.
Long-haul arrival plus immigration, airport transfer, payment setup, and jet lag should not be treated as a usable touring day.
Station or airport choice changes luggage flow, hotel area, and how stressful the route feels.
The first day should not depend on QR payments, food ordering, maps, and train confidence all working smoothly.
Soft scenery helps only when the hotel base and transfer method are chosen to reduce stress rather than add another layer.
A first-time China route often looks sensible on paper but still feels hard because arrival recovery and transfer logic were ignored.
The trip gets easier when the first hotel, first transfer, and first scenic section are chosen to reduce stress rather than maximize efficiency.
The smartest move is often to clarify booking order before locking the cheapest train, hotel, or side trip.
Main international flights only after confirming arrival and departure logic and whether the first night needs airport-side or city-side recovery.
Hotels, high-speed rail, scenic-base transfer, and any tickets that depend on exact timing.
Payment setup, backup card or cash plan, translation app, hotel addresses in Chinese, and one emergency contact method.
Your route is a good first-time China shape. The concern is not the city list. It is the first 48 hours and the scenic-base logistics design.
I would not treat the Beijing arrival day as sightseeing. Use it for recovery, payment and app setup, and getting comfortable with taxis, maps, and basic rhythm.
Before hotels are booked, we should check exact arrival time, station choices, luggage flow, and whether the scenic stop should be a protected base rather than a rushed add-on.